Every song you write
every melody you sing
every book you publish
every photograph you take
every blog you post
everytime you speak
everytime we meet
everytime i smile
you really must be mine.......
FROM:me
to: anonymous
Thursday, October 1, 2009
everything you do
Posted by fatou at 6:30 PM
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3 comments:
IN a nice way this leaves me almost speechless...It makes you wana know...What you can't ya know.?
I like the parallelism in your poem and how the last line is totally different from the one before it. I love when poems are written like this.
This reminds me of that Police song "I'll Be Watching You". It's interesting cuz I used to write songs in my spare time.
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