When I look into your
big brown eyes
To my notice
I see you light up
like a star
A star
that comes from Heaven
Just to watch
over me
You're my star
that bright's up my day
You're the star
that I will love
forever
No matter what anyone
say's or does
I'll always be
loviing my star
forever and ever to come
created by: Reecey Renee
Wednesday, September 30, 2009
my new shooting star
Posted by fatou at 6:40 PM
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Very intresting...But can you grasp the meaning behind the scars and smiles..I wana hear what you have to say also..I could careless about what they have to say
the meaning behind the stars and smiles is that there is a person that keeps the stars open for me. this person is never to be forgotten within my heart. there will always be a place for them to lay on, they will always have my heart and there is no one like this person i have ever seen thats basically what it is trying to say
awww... im so jealous.... i wish i was a good poet... lol... that was really nice... so who were you talking bout?? if you were talking about anyone, that is... you dont have to tell me... is personal... lol... was it about randolf?? ok ill stop sorry... but serious oh so jealous... lol
lol... it was create by someone else.. so didn't see that... im sorry...
I like the poem i would've thought you created it but its all good lol. Its deep in many ways.
thank you its not created by me but its towards someone thats why i posted it.....
Most people probably read this poem and think it's about a lover or beau, but when i read it I immediately thought of those who take care of me, specifically my mother and my grandmother. Really sweet; makes me hink about how I appreciate them and what they do for me.
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